Hi everyone. I found some more pens etc, so we can now have 2 winners. They are Nova and Adel. Very well done girls – I loved your writing!
Hi – here are some creative images that I have created to try and encourage you to write a short story to describe what is happening. Just pick one. Get inventive and maybe explain what happened before, what the characters are thinking, and how the short story will end. Don’t forget to use the spell check on your iPad. There will be a prize for the best entry.
Here is some of the prize – I got them from a technology show last year.
Well done Adel, brilliant as always. I’m so pleased as I have found out an easy way of uploading videos onto the blog, straight from Google Drive. It will save me soooo much time – before it took me about 15 minutes to do it – now about 3 🙂
I will be able to add lots of Enzo’s animation easily now. Phew. However, please let me know if you have problems viewing this video. Only people from Caxton College will be able to view it, before anyone with the link could view it as I used Youtbe. It just goes to show, we are always learning – all of us. Thanks
Adel – you are such a hard worker and I love the ideas in your writing. The final paragraphs in particular have lovely messages about learning from our mistakes. Very well done.
On a shining morning, the egg family called Eggys were getting up from a noisy night in their house( the egg family house was the box of the eggs). “This night was very noisy don’t you think Max?” Dad wondered.
“Yes!” Max said.
“Breakfast, can you say to your brother that the breakfast is here!” Mum shouted.
“Okay, hey Johnny breakfast is done. Did you hear me?” Max asked.
“Max, can you go to your brother’s bedroom? Mum shouted. “Okay”! Max replied. “Oh no, Johnny is not here!!!”Max shouted.
Chapter 2:
We couldn’t find Johnny until we opened the door and you will not imagine what we observed was a broken egg. “Oh no, what I am going to do?” Mum said it worried. “We find out who threw out Johnny,”dad said it with concern
. The next day Johnny wasn’t on the floor but there were hairs on the floor of colour black and green. They found that there were hairs on the floor of the broom.
Chapter 3:
That night there was 100% that they were going to find the person who killed Johnny. They stayed awake for all of the night and guess what happens? The person who killed Johnny was a little girl, she was a sleepwalker.
The END!!! Guillem L Y5B
Well done Guillem. Good punctuation using NSNL (New Speaker New Line for when we use dialogue).
