Hello everyone, what do you think has happened in this photo? Get creative and inventive and describe what has just happened. It can be funny, serious, silly… anything really, as long as it is interesting and written well. Think about using adverbs, adjectives, similes, metaphors etc. and make sure you use a wide variety of punctuation. A purple form will be awarded to the most interesting one!
Belen6C
Wow! It’s amazing
Do you think somebody did it on purpose
caxtoncollege
I don’t know Belen. Why don’t you make up a little story to explain what happened?
caxtoncollege
Thanks Alba.
Lucas P. Y5C
It was a very suny day and a child was very excited, he was so excited to go to school that he was very crazy.Of course it was his first day at school!? He was totally crazy!?When it finished the day he shouted “There is my car!” there was his mom “oh mom!”???I’m so crazy! And he spined around and round and round and his mom was thinking…”He is totally crazy!”
Mom shouted “you should STOP!!!!!!!!!”. But the boy was spining and spining and spinning and spinning around. He caused a snow storm! He went through the cars and he threw all the cars around! Until it was all destroyed! It was all flying around, even his mom! ???????????????????????? OMG!!!!!! He stoped. He was so dizzy that he fell on the floor and bang!He was red like a tomato, when he looked around he fell and laughed a lot.
And then he thought”Were is my mom?”?
????????The end
I hope that you liked it??????
caxtoncollege
I love it. Very creative, amusing and entertaining. Well done for using a simile Lucas! I hope other children post stories as inventive!
Miss Çoleto
¡Qué divertido! ¡Me encanta!
Gonzalo 6c
Creative writing
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There was a giant tsunami that made the ground shake and pulled and pushed the cars and then, finally they turned upside down.
caxtoncollege
Thanks Gonzalo.
Óscar 6c
We all think an earthquake started flipping cars around and lots of stuff more. But scientists have recorded it and saw:It wasn’t an earthquake,it was the Yeti!
Also some clues can be seen like:The snow that could have been left by the Yeti, maybe he stepped on the crashed cars. Believe it or not, we think it is The Yeti.
caxtoncollege
Interesting ideas Oscar. Well done.
Miss Çoleto
¿El Yeti se ha ido a vivir a una ciudad? ¿Por qué habrá abandonado sus montañas? Mmmmm….
Holden
The parking lot was incinerated by a laser, then the cars all fell on there tires but one of the cars exploded and all the cars flipped over then the people saw a fluffy evil unicorn and they accused the unicorn of doing it.
caxtoncollege
Very unusual! Did the unicorn have the laser Holden? Thanks for your comment.
Holden
Yes it did
Maria6C
I think that happened because there was a lot of wind and the cars turned over.
Pablo B. Y6C
A long time ago, there was a city that was in a civil war and when a man went to there he knew that there were cars upside down and the police are trying to identify if it was a helicopter that has thrown a bomb or a tornado.It’s a mystery that now nearly all the city are trying to identify and other people from other cities as well want to identify the mystery.
caxtoncollege
Mmmm, a mystery. I like it.
Miss Çoleto
Muy interesante.
MartaO6C
A rubbish truck was getting the rubbish and the man who was driving it forgot to put on the hand brake.The truck rolled down the street,and it finally ended at the parking area.The truck crashed against lots of the cars.
caxtoncollege
Thanks Marta.
Jorge6C
There was a tornado and all the cars fell down and broke their glass, a tsunami got all the snow and the trees were without leave. The people were frustrated because the place had nothing, like the desert.
caxtoncollege
Well done for using a simile Jorge.
Julia6C
Today there has been an accident, it is a really strange! It has happened because they were doing a race in a place, so then they all crashed and they did a very strange thing. They were all shocked all the people did photos.
If that’s a real photo I am shocked????
caxtoncollege
I think it is real, but I’m not sure. Make sure you check your punctuation next time Julia. Thanks.
Martina 6c
NEW MODERN CARS
Steewen Thompyard has invented a new modern type of car,it works the other way round and when you close the car and go, the car throws ice cubes so that you know!
caxtoncollege
Interesting ideas Martina.Thanks.
Elvira6c
This is a disaster! This happened in the car park because the Hunger Hulk came.
In the beggining some people were insulting hulk, so he wanted revenge.
He threw a laser and all the cars were crushed.
caxtoncollege
Interesting Elvira. Please check your grammar next time you blog.
Lucía 6C
I think a snowman army thought that the cars were to remove the snow, so they were enemies and they all pushed every single car upside down, but my father says the wind has flipped them over, but I think my idea is better.
caxtoncollege
I think your idea is much better too Lucia! Much more inventive.
Lucía 6C
Thanks
Ariadna6c
One day the police were investigating the cars, because one of the cars had a bomb inside. Suddenly they heared ‘boooomb!’, they turned and saw a car exploding, all the policemen died and all the cars suddenly were upside down.
caxtoncollege
Very dramatic Ariadna. Please check your verb tense next time you blog.
Miss Çoleto
¡Madre mía! ¡Qué drama!
Maria
I liked the botanic gardens trip.
Maria
I loved the trip to the botanic gardens.
Ismael 6c
Ismael 6c
Hello everyone, today I bring you news. In America someone changed into the Hulk. There was a car park and all the cars were destroyed by him. The cars were as destroyed like when an iPad falls onto the floor! After that, the police came and tried to kill Hulk. But they couldn’t.???
caxtoncollege
Well done Ismael – but please check your grammar before you post.
Santi 6-D
I think there is a giant magnet underground.
caxtoncollege
Could be Santi – why don’t you try to expand your writing.
Candela T 6D
A long time ago, on a sunny day a crazy little boy was going to the cinema with his friends Alberto and Vicente to see the film THE LAST SURVIVOR??? They bought too much sugar in sweets, so much each of them took 10 bags of sweets??? The first 10 mins were so entertaining that they had eaten all the sweets after 20 mins of the film, so they went to get another bag.
When they got out and saw a formula 1 car, they just thought to try a round, but because they had eaten so much sugar they pressed the acceleration button
very hard and made a tornado!
THE END
I hope you like it.
caxtoncollege
I do like it Candela. Imaginative ideas. Please try to use commas within sentences to improve your writing. Thanks.
Ekaterina 6B
ACCIDENT IN NAGASAKI!!!!!!!?
A long time ago there was a city in Japan called Nagasaki. One day in Nagasaki a terrible earthquake happened at night. Everything was ruined. When the police came they saw that all cars were upside down and houses were without windows and without anybody inside…
The end…
I hope you enjoyed it!????
caxtoncollege
Well done Ekaterina. That could be an explanation that is possible in real life. Especially because Japan has lots of earthquakes, I lived there for 3 years and I experienced about 20 small earthquakes!!! Thanks and keep on blogging!
Claudia6C
The cars were upside down because a tractor with a huge magnet got cars, but the tractor run out off batteries, so the cars fell upside down.
caxtoncollege
Well done, but check verb tense next time Claudia. How about adding a simile?
Javi M
Godzilla and King Kong fought and all the city was destroyed.
caxtoncollege
Javi – when you posted this you forgot to include your name. Ask me about it.
Miss Çoleto
Hace varios siglos, las ciudades humanas fueron tomadas por gigantes de otro planeta. Muchos humanos huyeron a otros planetas pero otros se quedaron para descubrir qué querían los gigantes. Y en lugar de empezar una guerra… empezaron a colaborar.
Los gigantes extraterrestres necesitaban poco para vivir: grandes espacios para moverse y mucha comida-basura.
Gracias a ellos, los basureros del mundo desaparecieron; y las fábricas contaminantes, y los grandes edificios que no dejaban ver el sol…
Y los humanos les enseñaron a reir, a disfrutar … y a jugar.
Y lo que veis en esta foto es un tablero para jugar a las tres en raya: un gigante pone sus tres fichas-coche del derecho y otro gigante pone sus tres fichas-coche del revés. Así de sencillo.
caxtoncollege
Wow! Thanks for your input Ms Coleto, it’s very creative and imaginative. Nice to see some of the humans got along with the giants – give peace a chance is what I say…
Lucas P. Y5C
Me encanta ???
Lucas P. Y5C
Give Ms Coleto a purple form from me…????
caxtoncollege
Ha ha! Well done Lucas. Don’t forget to use your spellcheck and don’t use too many emojis. Keep up with the blogging!
Lucas P. Y5C
Who is the best at the moment???
caxtoncollege
Not sure – but I think you have put the most effort into it so far. We’ll see if I get any more entries today, but you have an excellent chance Lucas!
Lucas P. Y5C
Thanks! Mr Fraser?
Lucas P. Y5C
Muy bien Ms Coleto??????????????????
Blanca S
I think the wind was very strong and pushed everything upside down!
caxtoncollege
Thanks Blanca – but please don’t use you full name next time.
Cesar 6C
What happened?
Laura 6b
Car evolution
One year ago there were cars that stood in four wheels but what is this?
Simple, it all started when a famous scientist had an idea, he thought, “If we can go in cars that have four wheels, why can’t we go in cars that are upside down? So he recruited thousands, no, millions of scientists to help him. Half of them didn’t believe in that but the other half did. He said to the ones that didn’t believe him, “If you don’t believe me now go away but if I can finally fabricate upside down cars, you will work for me until you die!”
All the people that didn’t believe him agreed to his conditions and they left him.
After years and years and years of working on his project he was about to give up, when suddenly he had a strange but at the same time brilliant idea to make those special cars.
His idea was to put tiny little wheels at the bottom (or the top for the cars that had four wheels) that anyone could see. He did that and tried it himself.
For his surprise it worked! He was amused! He finally had done it! The only thing he had left to do was to promote it, so he talked to the TV people and asked if they could add his TV Commercial, at the beginning they refused to do it but when they saw it they couldn’t resist to put it immediately on TV, it was too good and amazing.
When the people started seeing the commercial they wanted to buy the cars immediately so they went to the shop and bought them.
All the people wanted so much those cars that in two hours the streets were full of upside down cars and there was no sign of the normal cars. The scientist was so proud of himself that he nearly forgot his promise with the other scientists.
He called every one of them and for all their lives they were working for that scientist and together they created lots of inventive projects. They became rich, really, really rich.
THE END
I hope you liked my story! ❗️??
caxtoncollege
Another fantastic story Laura! Well done! Think about using a wider variety of sentence starters to make it even better.