Persuasive Writing

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Hi everyone,

Here is a fantastic example of a very persuasive letter from Elsa in Ms Shepherd’s class. It hasn’t been marked by the teacher in this copy. My challenge to you is to find great examples of the features of persuasive writing and then post them here. Also, because it hasn’t been marked, you could tell us all how you could improve it(remember to be positive and polite).

ARE YOU UP FOR A CHALLENGE?

PS remember all ideas for the ICT suite name and posters need to be in on Monday! There is a folder in the ‘General’ section of your Google Drive to send me work for the blog for any digital work. Thanks.

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7 Comments

  1. Julia6C

    It’s really nice, well done Elsa 😀😀😀

  2. Blanca 6C 😃👍🏻

    I really like it! Well done Elsa!

  3. Julia6C

    Writing the in conclusion a little longer.

  4. Arnau6C

    Wow! That was amazing. Keep it up! 👍👍

  5. Elsa

    Thank you Julia.

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