Hi – no Disgusting Dave today as fortunately, we have an amazing short story written by Rosa in Y6. It is fantastic and I really encourage everyone to listen to it (and read along, as I’ve used a teleprompter app). It might inspire you to get writing, as it has certainly inspired me! Let us know what you think about it, please. Well done superstar writer Rosa!!!
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Iris 5A
Whoever Rosa is – she’s a superstar!
caxtoncollege
She’s a talented writer for sure!
Teresa
Hoooooooo Rosa that was amazing I want you to write another story like this, this story gave me lots of thought ? about what was going to happen next ………….. I think that when you are old you might be a children’s author, if you are the little children that read it they would love it, as I did. ???
This is a mysterious story and I love ❤️?mysterious storys.
And as well it was a magical story. Cause the map appears in Lucy’s head, it is amazing hearing it, where did you get all those ideas?
It was amazing your punctuation commas, capitals, children in the next year make lots of mistakes sometimes, it’s incredible you didn’t have any !!!!
I enjoyed that as much as Mr Fraser’s stories!!!!!!?
I like you decide to help the boy that was trapped there with you …….
Aswell I really like the idea of the portal that you get trapped and needed to do a quest ?and that story that you gave in navigation class about the moon, incredible.
Aswell is happy in the ending because you get out of the portal
And the time didn’t pass outside the portal.
Have a lovely week, every week we could have one of your stories so you can share your amazing incredible ideas ? with year 5 and 6 and everyone that has the Caxton college blog …………..
Have a lovely ?week…Congratulations, it is amazing ?
caxtoncollege
I completely agree Teresa and I imagine that Rosa’s bucket is full to the brim after reading your positive comments. Thanks for your comments and enthusiasm Teresa – you are a star!
Teresa?
It’s lovely your story, Rosa because you are called Rosa you could do a story of a magic Rose, what do you think?
Nicole5c
That is such a cool story, even though Rosa isn’t reading this from me I’m going to say well done and congratulations to her. Now that I’ve heard the story I want it with me, like I mean I’d like it as a book so I can read it to friends family and people I know. This is a great story!
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I completely agree Nicole – however, I’m sure that Rosa will read your kind comments on here. I would imagine she’d be delighted!
Aaden Y6A
Great story Rosa! ?? It was very inspirational! I’m thinking about writing my own now! 🙂
caxtoncollege
It is Aaden. You should have a go at writing a short story – you’ve got a wonderful imagination and fantastic vocabulary. I’m so glad Rosa has inspired you.
Nicole5c
Me too! I was like! “Hey I’m going to try and write a story sometime!” I actually promised my dad to do a story for him because I told him that I want to be a author! He has a company called Pearson or Longman and they edit writings and storys and the illustrate books! They actually invented bug club!
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Wow – that’s interesting that your dad works with Pearson! It must be a sign that you should be an author! I look forward to reading some of your writing. Let me know if I can help you out with your writing Nicole.
Teresa?
Who invented Bug club?
caxtoncollege
No idea Teresa – someone very clever… Maybe we could search on the internet and find out… a challenge!
Nicole5c
Ok! No problem!
Nicole5c
Wait you know Pearson? My father is the boss actually so he has people working with him.
caxtoncollege
Hi – sorry for the confusion, but I only know Pearson books and products, not anyone who works for them.
Isabel
Amazing Rosa that was a fantastic story congrats ?
I hope you are happy with your great job.
You are a great writer.
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She is indeed. Thanks for your lovely, positive comment Isabel.
Lia
Wow that’s amazing
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It’s fantastic, isn’t it. I’m posting another today from Amelie, it’s a different genre – rather spooky… Thanks for your comment Lia.