More Amazing Writing from Caxton Kids!!!!

I love suspense and mystery… and this piece of writing by Amelie has masses of it. I think it’s brilliant – hope you agree! Please forgive my attempts at sounding spooky… at least I tried.

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13 Comments

  1. That is sooo spooky!

  2. Amelie E. 6A πŸ˜‹

    I loved it! Thanks!

    • caxtoncollege

      I’m glad you liked it – I hope I did it justice… You and Rosa should be very proud of yourselves!

  3. Isabel

    That was incredible congratulations Amelie
    You did it so good and spooky.
    I hope you are good and lots of fun.
    Isabel

  4. Teresa😍

    I loved you to read another one of disgusting Dave please

  5. Teresa πŸ€‘

    Who that was super spooky, it scared me! I loved the way you described the scene and all the adjectives and the synonyms like instead of ‘said’ another word like yelled, whispered etc I love it 😻. I want another story from you aswell. I love the suspension dots ……. what will happen at the end of the story, I loved the spooky sound it was great πŸ€—πŸ€—

  6. Teresa πŸ€‘

    I heard it 2 times I love the crazy 😝 hair of the teacher 😻😻😻

  7. Aaden Y6A

    Wow, that was very scary! Now I don’t want to go to the woods!

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