I love suspense and mystery… and this piece of writing by Amelie has masses of it. I think it’s brilliant – hope you agree! Please forgive my attempts at sounding spooky… at least I tried.
More Fantastic Writing from Adel (from the images created earlier in the term)
More Amazing Art (can you guess who has created which piece of art work and what application they have used if it is digital?)
Enzo’s Scratch Adventure Part 2
Writing Challenge – don’t forget to get your wonderful writing uploaded to the Google Classroom folder.
Enzo’s Splendid Scratch Jr Work
Caxton College British School
Nicole5c
That is sooo spooky!
Amelie E. 6A ?
I loved it! Thanks!
caxtoncollege
I’m glad you liked it – I hope I did it justice… You and Rosa should be very proud of yourselves!
Isabel
That was incredible congratulations Amelie
You did it so good and spooky.
I hope you are good and lots of fun.
Isabel
caxtoncollege
Lovely comments Isabel – thank you very much.
Teresa?
I loved you to read another one of disgusting Dave please
caxtoncollege
Another vote for Dave!
Teresa ?
Who that was super spooky, it scared me! I loved the way you described the scene and all the adjectives and the synonyms like instead of ‘said’ another word like yelled, whispered etc I love it ?. I want another story from you aswell. I love the suspension dots ……. what will happen at the end of the story, I loved the spooky sound it was great ??
caxtoncollege
I agee Teresa! Thanks for your comment.
Teresa ?
I heard it 2 times I love the crazy ? hair of the teacher ???
caxtoncollege
Thanks Teresa!
Aaden Y6A
Wow, that was very scary! Now I don’t want to go to the woods!
caxtoncollege
It was pretty spooky!