More Outstanding Y6 Writing – Lucas B

Here is some absolutely splendid writing from the Writers Club. It may be a little difficult for non-native English speaker to ‘get’ it all, as it is absolutely oozing with figurative language;  imagery, personification, metaphors, smilies, onomatopoeia, alliteration…  See if you can work out what it is about, possibly discrimination and intolerance?

Very well done Lucas – your writing always astounds me!

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4 Comments

  1. Liam

    What an amazing writing Lucas!!! 😉🏆🎖

    I thought it was Yr 8 writing. 😱

  2. Teresa😜

    Omg that was amazing

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