Hi everyone,
Here is a fantastic example of a very persuasive letter from Elsa in Ms Shepherd’s class. It hasn’t been marked by the teacher in this copy. My challenge to you is to find great examples of the features of persuasive writing and then post them here. Also, because it hasn’t been marked, you could tell us all how you could improve it(remember to be positive and polite).
ARE YOU UP FOR A CHALLENGE?
PS remember all ideas for the ICT suite name and posters need to be in on Monday! There is a folder in the ‘General’ section of your Google Drive to send me work for the blog for any digital work. Thanks.
Julia6C
It’s really nice, well done Elsa ???
caxtoncollege
Thanks Julia. How do you think Elsa could improve it?
Blanca 6C ???
I really like it! Well done Elsa!
Julia6C
Writing the in conclusion a little longer.
caxtoncollege
Thanks Julia. What would you add to the conclusion? Anyone can answer, not just Julia.
Arnau6C
Wow! That was amazing. Keep it up! ??
Elsa
Thank you Julia.