I love suspense and mystery… and this piece of writing by Amelie has masses of it. I think it’s brilliant – hope you agree! Please forgive my attempts at sounding spooky… at least I tried.
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Caxton College British School
Nicole5c
That is sooo spooky!
Amelie E. 6A ?
I loved it! Thanks!
caxtoncollege
I’m glad you liked it – I hope I did it justice… You and Rosa should be very proud of yourselves!
Isabel
That was incredible congratulations Amelie
You did it so good and spooky.
I hope you are good and lots of fun.
Isabel
caxtoncollege
Lovely comments Isabel – thank you very much.
Teresa?
I loved you to read another one of disgusting Dave please
caxtoncollege
Another vote for Dave!
Teresa ?
Who that was super spooky, it scared me! I loved the way you described the scene and all the adjectives and the synonyms like instead of ‘said’ another word like yelled, whispered etc I love it ?. I want another story from you aswell. I love the suspension dots ……. what will happen at the end of the story, I loved the spooky sound it was great ??
caxtoncollege
I agee Teresa! Thanks for your comment.
Teresa ?
I heard it 2 times I love the crazy ? hair of the teacher ???
caxtoncollege
Thanks Teresa!
Aaden Y6A
Wow, that was very scary! Now I don’t want to go to the woods!
caxtoncollege
It was pretty spooky!