Creative Writing – Some ‘Eggsamples’ :)

This is a BookCreator from Adel that we have made into a video, so we can add it to the blog. I’ve learnt something new. I think Adel is going to add sound to it to improve it even more. Well done Adel – a great message in your story.

I will post lots more of your wonderful work soon.  Are there any more entries? I will give a purple form to all the entries. YOU CAN DO IT!

Here is another from Candela.

The egg

Once upon a time, there were 3 little eggs called Floppy, Mopsy and Cottontail. One sunny day as they walked up they saw a strange looking thing black,  it, it, it is hot? One of them said that it was a pan. Suddenly Mopsy said I need to go to the toilet but just before jumping. Flopps she said “wait a minute if we jump it is probably that one of us could happen some thing this my mum” she jumped and cracked herself and we had to cook her so we could eat it.
SUDDENLY Floppy said “ well let’s test it  Floppy jumped and before someone could say anything he already was all cracked up on the floor. Cottontail said nearly crying “oh now what are we going to do without our Mopsyyyyyyy. SURPRISINGLY Mopsy came and said ”what all the noise of crying – my head had begun to hurt me a lot”.  Floppy and Cotton suck their heads quickly and say you are alive and Mopsy says of course I am alive. Floppy said to “Mopsy do not that ever again I was afraid of what could happen to you” . And once was told that it never happened again so that’s why they lived happily ever after.

The poem is from Candela y5b.